Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Cat Fight- Descriptive Paragraph

Melanie, a shopping-loving model, has just entered her favourite store, Holt Renfrew. While she is in one of the most expensive clothing sections, she encounters another girl. Her name is Gisele, a stay-at-home mom who occasionally likes to splurge. Melanie, seeing Gisele and surveying her appearance, throws her a dirty look and begins to rant to her boyfriend about her over the cell phone.

8 comments:

snowyarchangel said...

Very interestin piece here never read anythin like it before. Enjoyed it very much

Moby Dick said...

Hiii Triston :) how are yous? I wrote this with you ^____^ I LIKEEE.

fresh_man said...

looks like ur advertising christmas on ur page with the red and green colours...lol

cupids EYE said...

lovin this!!! So creative

LOLLERSKATER said...

that's a handful of wins for you :D!

reconstruction site said...

ew holt renfrew.

funkie said...

lol =]
ur page is very italian xp
and i enjoyed readin hah lol =]

Ms.Madame Fantasmia said...

Nice work to bad it was not longer